Monday, February 12, 2018

Revised Logline

Old
Logline, Story: A no-nonsense child discovers enormous monsters in a dense forest near her grandparent’s house, and works to sort out the can of worms opened by their quirky personalities.

Logline, Gameplay: It's a 3rd person adventure where you create a unique community of monsters, by wrangling monster needs, tunneling deeper into the woods, going on scavenger hunts, and making monsters get along with each other.

New
Logline, Story: A child discovers enormous monsters in a dense forest by her grandparent’s house, and works to sort out the monsters’ crazy problems.

Logline, Gameplay: A 3rd person adventure where you create your own neighborhood, chopping your way through problems to help monsters get along with each other.

Themes
Overarching: Can of Worms, Grumpy old man with a golden heart, Stunted growth vs. unchecked growth
Character: Unconventional solutions
Environment: Searching for something around the corner

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